Plus: Your description and analysis for the political cartoon was great! You had a very strong topic sentence which served as a good umbrella for the entire paragraph. Great job connecting the political cartoon to Anne Bradstreet, especially when you said her writing symbolizes her freedom and the right to express herself. Great paragraph.
Delta: When you were reflecting on the poem In reference to my children, should describe the feelings you and your mother have for each other. You need more details because you can't say a statement without backing it up. Also, you should add a background to your writing so it can actually be read.
Plus: Your description and analysis for the political cartoon was great! You had a very strong topic sentence which served as a good umbrella for the entire paragraph. Great job connecting the political cartoon to Anne Bradstreet, especially when you said her writing symbolizes her freedom and the right to express herself. Great paragraph.
ReplyDeleteDelta: When you were reflecting on the poem In reference to my children, should describe the feelings you and your mother have for each other. You need more details because you can't say a statement without backing it up. Also, you should add a background to your writing so it can actually be read.